[Report This]Date: January 24 2023 12:33 AM Title: Yuna
OMG So fucking hot!!!
[Report This]Date: January 22 2023 5:17 AM Title: Yuna
Will this story ever be revived? I love it so much and hate to see it end abruptly. But I hope wherever you are Max333 that you're doing well. Thank you for such an exciting time with Yuna, Faith and James :)
[Report This]Date: December 14 2021 6:21 AM Title: Yuna
Hey you still around?
[Report This]Date: October 01 2018 3:27 PM Title: Yuna
Damn man I was thrilled to see this story pop back up in my list, a lot of great stories get left for dead and I had chalked this one up to that. Good luck with your patreon and such, I could chip in a few bucks monthly, but I wouldn't expect too much since you aren't that famous...but best of luck man you have the skills to make it.
Date: September 29 2018 10:34 AM Title: Yuna
Veyr Very happy to see u back, looking forward to reading the new one. I'll definitly be waiting for more, also following the tumblr now. From what I remember I do love your writing, so if u ever do consider it I bet some people would commission u
[Report This]Date: August 17 2018 9:24 PM Title: Yuna
Wish the butt made its appearance before your motivation ran out, but hey I'll take 12 extremely hot chapters of smut when I can get them. FYI if you had a btc wallet or something I'd be down to pay you to continue.
Date: December 17 2017 9:46 AM Title: Yuna
I really love the story. I understand how it can be hard to keep the story going without taking the liberty in making Yuna especially more and more sadistic. It's sad that it seems you are no longer going to be continuing (unless you are just taking an extremely long hiatus). I was looking forward to see what happens next (what body parts and spells you would come up with). With his sister getting renewed resolve and Yuna pulling it off, there was a decent amount of content I think you could have went for. If you do happen to read this, know you still have some fans out there that are still wishing for more!
[Report This]Date: March 16 2017 8:11 PM Title: Yuna
I'm in the same boat as Kentaryu. I don't want to spam your reviews though so I'll try and make this my last one pleading for more. If you're done then thanks for this much at least it was a great story
[Report This]Date: December 19 2016 3:23 AM Title: Yuna
I can only re-read this story so many times. I mean probably, it hasn't gotten old yet...but you should still continue it soon.
[Report This]Date: October 18 2016 9:25 AM Title: Yuna
Yes another great addition to keep us wanting more!!!
Date: October 16 2016 11:56 AM Title: Yuna
Re: below:
No problem. Thanks for the response. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I'll always answer any review I receive, I think that's the least I can do to thanks people who take their time to share their opinion and ideas with me!
I'll do my best, thanks!
[Report This]Date: October 10 2016 2:48 AM Title: Yuna
Really good. I'd be really happy to see more foot stuff, preferable with a focus on sweat and toe-jam etc), and some butt stuff. I was very glad to see armpit content, so thanks for that! Navel content is really rare, and I think that'd fit well - maybe the girls could do some sit-ups along with their jogging, haha ^^
Apart from that, just keep going as you are. You're doing a great job. My personal resuest would be to have a chapter or two where the protagonist is even smaller, maybe <1mm.
Author's Response:
Hey there!
Thanks a lot for the review!
There will be more of foot content, do not worry! Although our dear giantesses will now start using other parts of their body, it does not mean this will be the end of foot torture :)
As for navel content and getting James <1mm, I'm sorry but I probably won't be able to write anything of that sort. Indeed, those are a not fetishes I'm familiar with, and me trying to do so would result in failure. Hopefully, that's all right with you, and I'll manage to keep you interested in the story with what's to come!
[Report This]Date: October 09 2016 3:26 PM Title: Yuna
Cast a spell to I ncrease the stench of their feet to ungodly levels. Put him in someone's socks or shoes and cast a spell so they don't notice him so he gets tortured and played with unknowingly no matter what he does to get attention. There are so many possibilities.
Author's Response:
Alright, thanks!
I just wanted to be sure by what you meant with "magical ways to punish him".
Your ideas are similar to mines, hopefully you'll love what's to come :)
[Report This]Date: October 09 2016 1:00 PM Title: Yuna
I hope James get through to them that he does not want this.
Author's Response:
Hmm, will he? He tried so much already, nothing worked so far...
He seems to be losing hope. But who knows? He might find a way...
[Report This]Date: October 09 2016 11:13 AM Title: Yuna
Finally a new chapter! ;). I like where this is going. Feet is my preference but ass punishment work too! Try to find some magical way to punish him a lot :)! Those are the best!!
Author's Response:
Hey, happy to see you again!
Any ideas about those magical ways to punish him? :)
Thanks for the review !
[Report This]Date: September 01 2016 10:46 AM Title: Yuna
Awesome Chapter! I hope there is more Magical Punishments soon those are my favorite when Magic tortures him or forces him in some way to be tortured!!!
Author's Response:
Hmm, I love that too!
I'll probably include that pretty soon !
Thanks for being there, your reviews help me going !
[Report This]Date: August 26 2016 2:19 PM Title: Yuna
Hi there,
My only criticism so far, has nothing to do with your English. It's perfect in my opinion. :)
No, the criticism is that I'm reading your story because one of your tags is 'Butt'. So far, I've read 9 chapters. It's good, very good, but I'm not a huge fan of feet and that's all there's been so far.
So, my only advice would be to start planning on using the other tags so that your non-foot audience doesn't leave. :)
Thornton
Author's Response:
Hey there, thanks a lot for your review !
No worries, "Butt" is coming, friend. I've added the tag because at the start of the story I was sure there would be some of it, but I knew it would be a long time from the start. Apologizes if that's what you came for in the first place. I'll start adding warnings about that kind of stuff so readers won't be disappointed not seeing their favourites themes.
In my honest opinion, that tag should become fairly active around chapter 11-12. Before that, bear with me; adding that tag without giving any information about its appearance was my mistake. Thanks for pointing it out, I'll write it down on chapter 1.
[Report This]Date: August 21 2016 7:59 PM Title: Yuna
Very good addition.
It seems Yuna's feet aren't smelling so bad anymore, Jay hasn't even died ;)
Author's Response:
Jay dying would be the end of his torment, and we don't want that, do we ? ;)
Be sure he suffered an awful lot though, 2 weeks in boots non-stop does grow quite a smell!
Thanks for the review! :)
[Report This]Date: August 21 2016 3:06 AM Title: Yuna
Who are you and what have you created?!
This is so good so disturbingly good!!! The unaware factor that they are actually doing something he hates its really really good. And the english you're using it's excellent! I've got an eye on this story. WTH I've got both eyes and my mind eye on this!
A drop of this story won't be tolerated! 10/10
Author's Response:
Hahaha, thanks a lot for the review! That enthusiasm cheers me up a lot! :)
Damn it, if you won't tolerate a drop, now there's no way I'll stop...
Date: August 17 2016 1:48 PM Title: Yuna
Anothrt great chapter, Max. Loving James being shrunken and at the mercy of his sister and best friend - though they seem to have none. NOTICED THE PUKING THING too but figured it was an oversight.
All in alll you have yet to disappoint. Great work! keep it up!
Author's Response:
Damn it, you saw it too!
Hopefully there won't be any more of those mistakes :P
Thanks!