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Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 17 2016 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

One story is like to see is a one about another human size exploration crew getting virtually decimated on a foreign planet and the survivor having to find a way to make peace with the Ingress like locals, and eventually work together to get back to earth, thus introducing another species into the mix.'Olympus' would be a great storyline to base the setup on.

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Date: December 16 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

Maybe catch up with Aaron and friends next story?

Reviewer: Keltohey Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2016 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 8..."6 minutes till midnight" pt. 2

This is excellent! You are Professional writer, can't wait for the next chaptet :)

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2016 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 8..."6 minutes till midnight" pt. 2

Omega's back, great, wonder if they'll be confronted this time

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

Had an idea for after this story, maybe an intro into the omega series? The stuff is right up your alley and could use some tech heavy add-ons, great series, hasn't been added to since last year, it really needs a good beginning story as well as a sequel to the hostage crisis

Reviewer: Js23 Signed [Report This]
Date: November 27 2016 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

Unbelievable! Maybe a little less gore and a little more caring interaction,
You've also got me wondering where the h play Aaron is, what's the other tiny world from the last chapter doing, where's Omega, and why is Aaron almost identical to the new hero, ( I honestly forgot his name!)
You're doing great, just wanted to drop my 2 cents in the can

Author's Response: As revealed in the final chapter of the first Invasion, Aaron and his family is on the Ark exploring space as to him returning I won't rule that out if I write a follow up to this series. Tiny world? If you mean the one shot story that bridged Invasion and Vacation, honestly I figured it ran its course. Hmm...maybe I can write a story about it. When I thought about this new hero I wanted him to be very similar to Aaron so it would be easier to relate to but at the same time give him certain character flaws a new idol worshiping hero could have. Omega is around. Saying anything more would be telling :)

Reviewer: GiantessLover122 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

Great job on this by the way!

 

I was also wondering if you were going to do anymore Size Zone seasons?



Author's Response: Probably not lol. Size Zone was hard! 30 different story ideas whew! The readers did help me though. Thanks you guys!

Reviewer: zol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

wow, would give you 20 out of 10 if I could. didn't read all yet but I loved it already.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 07 2016 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 1...The Return

Great to see this series again and you've brought it back in such a cool way. Loved the whole mind control aspect. Hope to see more.

aaron

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