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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Yeah! He's an Australian-based gts fan, who particularly likes vore, and who used to regularly read and review, here. That is; until he got born again via the 7th-Day Adventists. Their strict religious doctrine evidently makes it a sin to even _read_ science fiction and fantasy based on Greco-Roman mythology (like some of the stories, here)!

Reviewer: daftpunk Signed [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

really well done! you've done a great job creating memorable characters and story hooks. I was wondering if you would be including more unaware interaction with ella as the protagonist (accidently/through forces beyond his control) isn't noticed by her or misplaced.



Author's Response:

Ooh, grand idea, I'll get on that for sure.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 02 2016 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Incredibly erotic descriptions and the interactions, loved it so much.



Author's Response:

Cheers, I hope the rest of the story continues to please.

Reviewer: LilBeni Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Good story, with much potential for greatness. If I may suggest, a few things I'd like to see are...financial/status humiliation (from rich as well as popular people), giant couples & cheating (with "better lovers", etc), promiscuous daughters getting back at daddy, and alienation plus degradation of the shrunken subject(s). Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the review, I have already drafted quite a bit of the story but I'll try my best to work in these ideas.

 

Cheers

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Fantastic writing, hugely absorbing.

Look forward to the big show starting up.

Author's Response:

Appreciate the encouragement and I certainly hope I can live up to your expectations in the chapters to come.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: August 01 2016 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Church

Timescribe would've loved these opening chapters.

Author's Response:

I'm afraid I dont know who Timescribe is, but judging purley from your phrasing I would assume he/she is a well known name in the community.

 

Cheers

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