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Reviewer: The Quiet Kid Signed [Report This]
Date: July 15 2020 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

I absolutely love your story!! You are a fantastic author!! Please make more!

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 19 2020 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

Ugh what a great story and an even greater writer! I really hope we can revisit these characters in a sequel because I’m so interested in where this could go! Like will Ella and Andrew ever come clean with each other? How will they live with themselves? What WILL happen after the summer ends?? I also wonder if the Hastings will help Ella and Andrew out as they leave home? And last but not least, what will happen to Susanne?? Because I'd love to see what Ella would do if she found her now… <.<‘

Anyways, thank you for this masterpiece of a story AND universe! So much fun to read (and so HOT)! lol

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 17 2020 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Moving Out

HOLY SHIT! Things are about to get real steamy in there… <.<‘ lol 


And I really hope Ella finds Susanne just so she can get her well-earned revenge… ;) 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Morning

Ugh, Andrew is one Lucky bastard! 

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Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2020 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Salvation

I really fucking hope Susanne gets exactly just what she deserves… -_-

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2020 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Clean Up

Ella's gonna be PISSED when she finds out what happened to Andrew... o_o

Also, poor little Raymonds ;-;

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2020 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Mess

"Ella”? More like “Cinderella”! Poor girl ;-; lol


Also, RIP Brian

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2020 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Beth

Conspiracy Theory: The military/government accidentally created the “shrinking disease” when trying to create this super-spy pill. The pill was eventually successful, but with the “shrinking diseases” now going viral throughout the world, they can’t release the pill to the general public in order to save lives because they would also have to admit guilt for creating the disease in the first place… <.<

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2020 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Discovery

Wow I think I officially fucking love Ella! @,@ lol

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Date: January 12 2020 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Andrew

HO LY SHIT O_O

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2020 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Plan

Is Ella some kind of witch? Because it seams like she’s got this whole town under her hypnotic spell… <.<‘ lol

 

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2020 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Church

Jody is one scary little girl... o_o

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Date: January 12 2020 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Jody

Definitely didn’t see that coming… Elaine might actually be luckier than Kevin 👀 lol

 

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Date: January 12 2020 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Ella

RIP Kevin ;-;

Reviewer: Ronaldinho10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 22 2019 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Party

Hey, man! I just read two of your stories (momma's boy and this) and I love your writing style I hope you release the sequel one day.

All the best! :)

Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: August 29 2016 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

I have greatly enjoyed this story. Well written with reminders of who everyone is. Ella is super awesome . Susanne was a cool story.

Loved it all,
Diesel

Reviewer: BigJames Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27 2016 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Climax

Loving the story, this was best chapter yet, lived the pace and the ending was fantastic. Can't wait to see where it goes. Would love to see a spin off with mother and shrunken son, maybe with bbw grandma as occasional baby sitter.

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