Date: April 10 2017 8:23 AM Title: Day 2. Chapter 10
Are you saying that all they did was insert a communicator into her brain, and not a bomb to go with it? That is so ridiculously stupid. How did they expect to negotiate with tihs psycho-goddess without any leverage?
This is a consistent issue I can't help but notice in your stories. An issue of "the army/government did not think this through and ended up making it worse." I love the way you describe your protagonists, but secondary characters tend to be underdeveloped, at least in my opinion.
Also, looks like you were rushing on this chapter. Error at the bottom: ALRIGTH
Author's Response:
Really... I thought you would have noticed already. "I, giantess" does not intend to have any plot consistency at all. When I wrote Side Effects, with all the limitations of someone doing it just for the sake of it, I tried to tie the plot together and develop the characters, but Vicki... for God's sake, not only she is a giantess with size-changing abilities but she has almost every single power in the comic book landscape (and if there are any I have not used, I may add them whenever I see fit...). It's like trying to make sense out of Superman...