[Report This]Date: September 12 2016 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 1
FUn story! I know I've been on the sidelines a bit, but I've been here with each chapter (which ill go back and review each one). I like how she basically has no restraint. She just loves flaunting her power (do I notice a theme in your stories ;) ? )
Author's Response:
Thanks! This is a different story concept, cheesier than Side Effects, but very fun to write (and hopefull to read). I'll be looking forward to your detailed reviews!
Vicki really has no restraint. That's the "beauty" in her character (at least to me as a writer, since it enables me to do almost any crazy thing I can think of). As for giantess flaunting their powers... I agree it's a theme in my stories, but then again, what is a giant young woman with infinite power to do? ;)
Cheers!
Date: August 19 2016 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
And why oh why does the army never show up on time?
I take it this will be a more conventional giantess storyline?
Author's Response:
In a story like this? I'm afraid the army will not show up until the story is in a cul-de-sac and it needs the army to get unstuck. If by conventional storyline you mean that I will not take care to have a carefully set-up plot to justify rampage scenes... yes, you're right, that's the intent for this story. It was kind of a divertimento and I ended up posting it I don't know why...
Date: August 19 2016 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
(Sigh)
Why is it that your giants are always so self-centred? Not that it is a bad thing per say, but your last story (last one I read) involved severe cases of megalomania (Side Effects).
And while I would normally appreciate DC references, you shouldn't compare your giant's strength to Superman because his is limitless. Instead, use Giganta or Garganta both of which are Giant characters. Just a suggestion.
Author's Response:
Hello! Welcome back! (I've missed your comments)
Well, to give the short answer: I guess that anyone with mild ego issues would become very self-centered after growing into a giantess.
Having said this: Lisa was not self-centered. Kelly was and Casey... well, she was just a psycho. Vicki and this story are meant to have a much lighter tone than Side Effects, though. As I mentioned in the intro, it's a story meant for fun, without too many intentions to develop the plot or the character. This is why I introduced the comic super-powers as well. In this context, Vicki is as stereotypical as a giantess can be, with the added benefit of the super-powers and the touch of explaining the story first person. I don't intend to have too much realism in this story... it's meant to be kind of comical, if you will.
As for the DC reference: the one that referred to her powers as Superman's is Vicki. I can tell you this: she is not interested in comics, so she made the mistake in association, but she does not care. To her, Giganta or Garganta are probably unknown characters, so it would not feel right to have her think about someone she does not know. Superman is probably as far as her super-hero knowledge goes, hence the reference.
Cheers!
Date: July 26 2016 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very nice story. I like your way of writing :) Keep on!
Author's Response:
Thank you! There is quite more of it coming, so I hope that you will continue enjoying. Please, keep letting me know what you think!
[Report This]Date: July 25 2016 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story, lie where it's going, but as mentioned in the story, some foot worship would be much appreciated. Some butt and breast worship would be great too.
Author's Response:
Well, I'm in the process of writing a worshipping scene, although I'm not sure it will be exactly what you are expecting. I'm glad that you are enjoying the story, though :)
Date: July 23 2016 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
Well the formatting was off and Vicki didn't seem too well developed at the start, kind of all over the place but your next chapters managed to clean it up and give us something better.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback. The truth is that in Chapter 1 I tried to pay homage to Eileen, maybe a little too much, since I re-used the same wrong formatting that was used in there. I decided to fix in in Chapter 2 and I guess that once I had gone over the first few lines I ended up adjusting the character a little more, even it I don't mean to have a too well developped character in this story.
The truth is the story is meant to be light in tone and quite a lot of set pieces put together with a looser plot than what's usual in my previous stories. It's more a "just for fun" type of story. I'm glad that part of it seems to be coming out alright, though.
Please, keep letting me know what you think.
Cheers!
Date: July 22 2016 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
First chapter was alright but you've really made the story come into its own with the next few. Well done!
Author's Response:
Well, I'm glad you like it and that you see it improving :)
I'm curious about your perception. What was the difference that made you e joy the last chapters more than the initial one?
Also, being this story an experience and with you being such a good writer and advisor in these topics, I wanted to ask you for your feedback on the approach and tone of this story vs side effects.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2016 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
Love the story :) if you could work in some butt crush and maybe even a fart that would be amazing, but it's amazing nonetheless!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I'm glad to see that you are enjoying it. I think that you will enjoy the coming chapter.
I'm experimenting a little bit with this story, trying many new things at the same time (the approach is quite different than in my previous trilogy), so I wanted to check with you what you like the most/the least about it.
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2016 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
Still awesome :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! Hopefully the quotation marks have helped :P
[Report This]Date: July 17 2016 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ah, right, I forgot that this was more of an affectionate parody-type story (mostly because it works really well as a 'real' one). I suppose I should give you that last half-star, eh?
Author's Response:
I wasn't doing it for the half-star, but it's appreciated nonetheless :P
It's interesting to read that the story works well as real tone too... I think some of the coming chapters are going to be even cheesier, so maybe that aspect is lost. Just to let you know, I decided to reach a compromise by keeping the ALL CAPS, as in Eileen's story but bringing back the quotation marks starting in Chapter 2, so at least it will be more compliant from a grammar point of view.
One of the things I want to try with this story is to take suggestions from the readers on what Vicki should do in future chapters. Do you have any ideas?
Cheers!
[Report This]Date: July 16 2016 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good overall, but the all-caps, quotation-marks-lacking dialogue style for the giantess is really off-putting.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I know what you mean about the all-caps and the lack of quotation marks. I would not typically do that (in my previous stories I use quotation marks and not caps), but the story I was taking as a starting point was written like this,s o I decided to go ahead and use the same formatting as part of the "homage". As I mentioned, my intention for this story was to be less serious (more cheesy if you want), so I thought it would not be such a big deal, but I'm interested on getting people's opinions. Do you think the story would improve if I got rid of this?
Thanks!