[Report This]Date: March 09 2018 4:01 AM Title: Aegean Labors
On 4. Aegean Labors
You are keeping a great pace here. During the first three chapters the young ladies begin to get settled into possessing a tiny man. I had begun to wonder when they were going to come to terms with that ownership and truly commence to use him as I believe they should. Finally! And I don’t mean to say that it took you too long to write about it; quite the opposite, your progression has the perfect rhythm. I can relate to it with my own teenage memories, and how long it took my friends and me to plunge into some Dark Side. Well done!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it. I was horrified to go back and read the old installments and find the erratic inconsistencies throughout sloppy editing and revision. So I went back and cleaned those up, and that built the momentum for the fourth installment, which was very helpful actually. I think the path forward is clearer, while keeping in the spirit of the previous installments (which were written decades apart from the lsat one). And yeah, part of this is a fantasy of wondering what girl parties were like, wanting very badly to be privy to that inner sanctum. I can only conjecture and try to be respectful in the course of it.