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Reviewer: Undersquid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 8:18 PM Title: Dreamlike State

On 2. Dreamlike State:

This was a very nice read. I feel this is something I would have done with my closest friends in order to get back at some nasty school bully. We didn't really have one... our school was too small and though mixed, the boys were seriously outnumbered, so if we'd done as described in the chapter, it would have been out of lust, or a shared crush. 

Myu favorite part was Biff's self-assurance when "realizing" this was a dream, and the girls' response now that they begin to sink into the awareness of what they have before him. On, I read!

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