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Reviewer: Undersquid Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 08 2018 7:48 PM Title: The Tormentor

"Tormentor" is a good title for the first episode. One assumes it's the larger-sized individual doing the tormenting, but it's not. It's Biff's description. With very few words you manage to reawaken some uncomfortable, high-school-related feelings. I like that you don't really describe him much, and Biff doesn't think he's particularly striking, which is often the case with lovely-looking people, even those that are self-centered assholes.

I look forward to reading the next installment!

Reviewer: tokubetsu Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 10:26 AM Title: The Tormentor

Really good so far! Can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

I really should pick this up again. I remember enjoying it, I had the seating chart all laid out... one of those many adventures enthusiastically started and dropped for no good reason.

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