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Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 15 2017 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: Dear Carly, Amen

Can't believe I missed two updates, but better late than never. I really liked the idea for chapter 12 with Jack being normal sized yet still being Carly's foot slave. I'd love to see a continuation of that. I also really enjoyed chapter 13, with Jack truly showing his love and devotion towards Carly, I love the way they're relationship is developing. Great stuff, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Hey, thanks. There will actually be multiple more chapters of the normal-sized Jack concept coming up, so I'm glad you liked it. This story is steadily going to explore more and more what-if type scenarios like that one to further flesh out Jack and Carly's relationship

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 14 2017 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 13: Dear Carly, Amen

Really loved the chapter! Having Jack literally worship her as A goddess seems very fitting. With all this great inshoe worship, I was thinking that it would be great to see some action with Carly's butt.Jack having to get to know all of Carly even her smells.Maybe in her panties or outside her panties with a tight pair of yoga pants. Not sure if you've done much on Carly's butt, but(heh) I would love to see it in this story.

 

Always enjoy the updates its crazy to see how far this series has gone with more to come!! Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks. While this story is mainly foot-focused obviously, there is room for butt action. I'm planning for some eventually

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 13: Dear Carly, Amen

My religion, Carlyism.



Author's Response:

Soon to be everyone's religion

Reviewer: officerkc Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 13 2017 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 13: Dear Carly, Amen

I loved this chapter and I love Carly lol. This chapter really begs for you to continue the main story lol. Although this story is amazing too!



Author's Response:

Thanks much. The main story will be continued eventually.

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