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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 23 2016 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 7: Never Again

I picked up on it, Jack really is atoning for sins to his angel of a sister.



Author's Response:

And all the people said, amen.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 21 2016 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 7: Never Again

Interesting and surprisingly heartwarming flashback/dream sequence. A good way to symbolize Carly and Jack's relationship as being one of more understanding and amiability as well as a nice moment of levity for the two. A different kind of chapter, but one I enjoyed none the less, keep up the good work.



Author's Response:

Thanks! And that's a good way of putting it; this chapter is meant to symbolize the drastically different spirit of their relationship in this what-if story.

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