Date: November 12 2016 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness
I like that he's starting to see his mother as a goddess too. I kinda wonder how jealous Carly would be.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it. We may be exploring that idea more in later chapters.
[Report This]Date: November 12 2016 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness
Great chapter, I'm grateful to see a quick update. I love the direction you've taken with this story and Jack and Carly's relationship, the sort of twisted and sick affection they have for each other is great. The plan of having Jack purposefully close by his family in Carly's sock or shoe is pretty devious and fits well with the direction, very well done. As always the goddess/slave dynamic is really well done too. Glad to see you back in action, can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading/reviewing. I've been having fun showing Carly and Jack in a way I couldn't before.
[Report This]Date: November 11 2016 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness
Carly's scent should always be appreciated, she is after all a God in her time.
Author's Response:
And any time
Date: November 11 2016 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness
SO FUCKING GOOD TO SEE HER BACK! Man, their TWISTED relation is the best ive seen on this site. Carly has a temperament i can couple to a girl I really know, just her and her imaginary brother is really simething. Amazing please continue, tje teasing of carly sealing finally jacks little soul into her absolute epicenter is EPIC
Author's Response:
Hey thanks. The teasing's just begun between them.
Date: November 11 2016 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 6: Cleanliness is Next to Carlyness
I'm digging it. I love your stuff, the MTO series is a favorite and also a frustration to me (Judy doesn't do as much in later ones physically to her son). This particular alternate universe series is cool. I like this better than the standard canon for some reason. I think I always imagine Carly with man feet, lol. It's the athlete thing. I love your writing!
Author's Response:
Thanks much. I've noticed from what you've posted on the site that we share some common subject interests; I intend to sit down and read more of your stuff at some point, as the bit I've seen so far I enjoyed.
Glad you like the TO series. Judy's lessened physical torment on Scott in the later stories is something I heard from a lot of people, and I do plan to address it in future stories.
And hopefully Carly's larger than average feet aren't a turn-off. They're definitely meant to be imagined in that powerful athlete way while still being feminine.