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Reviewer: Jmeuliere Signed [Report This]
Date: January 22 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 5: Couples Hike

I've asked myself multiple times, is there actually a picture of what Carly looks like?



Author's Response:

If you mean a picture of a real person, then no, there isn't. I somewhat like to let people fill in the smaller visual details themselves. Carly is very tan and tall, just shy of six feet, with dirty-blonde hair, blue eyes, and an athletic build.

Reviewer: Orpheus Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 5: Couples Hike

A well deserved 3 month break only to return with another precious chapter. I'm glad you're back, Jack. And I hope you stay a while this time. Don't let those real-life troubles push you around, you hear?

I, for one, am absolutely loving this direction. Sure, the implication of giving up your free will and humanity is still hanging grimly in the air above our little protag, but the way you write this chapter with such sensuous detail makes it such an endearing and comfy read.

I can almost hear Nina Simone singing "Just in Time" in my head while this chapter played on.

Anyway, again, welcome back. I look forward to seeing more of your stuff, however long it'll take. <3



Author's Response:

Oh I'm trying.

I'm glad you feel that kind of tone. My main goal with this story is to introduce the kind of comfort and synonymous affection that the other Blackmails can't have.

Chuckled at the Nina Simone thing.

Reviewer: Sg20855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 05 2016 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 5: Couples Hike

Great chapter, glad to have you back. it's always nice to read a new chapter about our favorite duo, looking forward to more, it's always worth the wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks much!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Couples Hike

Things are better when accept Carly's way into our hearts and minds.

 

Great comeback.



Author's Response:

Always, always, always.

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