Date: July 29 2016 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 4: Shoe-Tasting Party (Part 2)
Great chapters 3 and 4, footwear and insole stuff are some of my favorite stuff to read and you write it very well. Character interactions are still also well done between Jack and Carly. Great work so far, keep it up.
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. These are probably my favorite subjects to cover in macro.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2016 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 4: Shoe-Tasting Party (Part 2)
I'm amazed at how much I like Carly when Jack is a willing participate in her general treating of him.
Also I can't believe I forgot Carly was 5'11" and played basketball. It was just hard for me to focus on certain aspects of this series because Carly's character is so offputting to me.
aaron
PS looking forward to seeing more of Judy in mommy's time. Hope you decide to continue it.
Author's Response:
Hehe. She's turning out to be a much different kind of person in this story. I like to sometimes bring up her height to remind that she's practically a giantess even as a normal sized person.
I am working on the next Timeout but I'm not sure when it will be ready to post.
[Report This]Date: July 29 2016 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 4: Shoe-Tasting Party (Part 2)
Carly is wonderful, great to see things as the lord or whoever intended.
Author's Response:
All's right with the world
[Report This]Date: July 29 2016 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 4: Shoe-Tasting Party (Part 2)
Just have to wonder what's going to happen when Carly gets a boyfriend. I have a feeling Jack's life will change dramatically, and not necessarily for the better. She'll give Jack less attention, perhaps toss him aside in a shoebox. I'm not sure Jack could handle it, since essentially, Carly is his entirely life now.
Author's Response:
Who says Carly wants a boyfriend now? ;)