Date: July 09 2016 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
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Date: June 28 2016 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
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Date: June 25 2016 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Excited to read more. Great start!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: June 25 2016 9:23 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
A good start. Sets the stage for Matt and Sara, and I am curious as to how the other two will fit into the mix.
My only advice would be to watch formatting- it's a bit jarring to read at times and keep characters straight. I like to space out dialogue lines in my own writing.
Date: June 25 2016 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
I am liking it so far. I think you've done a pretty good job with character development as well. As for the shrinking, I think it's up to you. I personally like instant shrinking because it gets right into the action but slow shrinking probably helps with plot and development, so I think it's up to you.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your words and ideas! Indeed, I decided to go with instant shrinking in this story and saving slow-shrinking to a possible future story.
Date: June 25 2016 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 1: Introduction
Very curious to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you!