Reviews For Devotion to a God
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Reviewer: AdvancedY Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, this story is fascinating! It got my attention for the next chapters!

Reviewer: ssdfc12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 20 2016 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 2

Another great chapter for the amazing story. As always, I am really impressed with your ability to show the feeling of scale – this enormous difference of sizes between a boy and his tiny victims. The change of point of view at the beginning added to the overall quality of this chapter and increased the insignificance of tiny city.
I really liked the details you added – every action from the main character, every word he says, every body movement – everything affects the city in some way. Even the way, he deals with one of the cities, by merely stepping on it, described perfectly, starting from the great description of every leg and foot movement and ending with the destruction caused by impact and by his foot, quickly changing environment around.
Once again, really enjoyed everything in this chapter, as always – excellent quality.

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