Date: July 22 2016 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
No I meant like, the plot doesn't seem to go anywhere. Where are the parts of all the tags? I didn't see any of them yet. Where are the unaware, butt, vore parts?
Author's Response:
If I rememeber correctly, half of chapter 2 was unaware, and either chapter 6 or chapter 7 had some as well. At the end of chapter 8, Shawn had gotten trapped under Iris's bottom. As for vore, that was mostly featured in chapter 4, but there was a bit of mouth play in chapter 8 and I think a little in 5.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2016 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 8
Geez, it's kinda hard to keep liking Iris as a character when she not only forced Shawn to be a slave but treats him like complete crap like this. I'm not sure "being drunk" is a good excuse, she ripped off his arm off for the pettiest reason. Is this kind of slave/pet abuse normal for this race of aliens? Anyway, I'm looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I'd assume Iris isn't exactly everyone's favorite after the most recent chapters. For the slave/pet abuse being normal, it depends on the owner themselves, though the females of the species tend to be nicer, there are most certainly some that are cruel. I'm glad to hear you look forward to what happens next, and I not only appreciate the review but the five stars as well.
Date: July 15 2016 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 8
does anything happen anymore in the plot?
Author's Response:
If you're asking if there will be more plot coming up in a future chapter, then the answer is yes. There will most certainly be a chapter nine, though when it comes out you'll find if that's the last chapter or not. Anyways, thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2016 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Actually, he'll most likely bleed to death, despite the paper towel. So, I guess that means no chapter nine. :-(
Author's Response:
Whether Shawn is alive or not, there will be a chapter nine. Either way, I appreciate the review and the five stars.