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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2016 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 6

An extra-terrestrial species, capable of interstellar space travel, modeling their leisure time after our culture?

LOL! So much for being more intelligent.

Author's Response:

I mean, they do have the interstellar space travel thing going for them, as well as robotic delivery services and resizing devices. Plus, any other future devices that I may introduce in the future. Either way, thanks for the review, most certainly with the five stars. It is greatly appreciated.

Reviewer: geeman Signed [Report This]
Date: July 04 2016 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

I guess this slave thing was part of the objective then? What I don't get is why did she play nice with Shawn at first if she could have just overpowered him and taken him as her slave by force? Kinda roundabout if you ask me.



Author's Response:

More shall be explained as time progresses. I appreciate the review, but I cannot say anything, as it may or may not spoil things in the future. Once again, the review is appreciated.

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