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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed [Report This]
Date: February 07 2007 12:10 AM Title: Ch. 31: A Light Salad

I like the story lines.
However I find this style of choose-the-ending just too confusing to follow.

Author's Response: Thanks.  The story is far from done, did you run in to dead ends?  How might I make it less confusing?

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