Reviews For Naomi
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: tuyulboy Signed [Report This]
Date: June 01 2018 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

i always follow your stories.. i read this one many years ago.. some time i read again.. and again.. willing prey is may favorite..

i hope you write more... i always wait..

thanks for share..



Author's Response: Hi, thanks for reading (again). Yes, it blows my mind that I submitted this one 11 years ago. I looked at it last night, and felt the editing was really rough. So, I went back, split it into three chapters, and fixed the paragraph code, some punctuation, quotes and some other minor language things. I also love semi-willing vore (the prey is afraid of death, but still compelled to obey and/or overawed by pred.) Unfortunately, this site does not have a forum, but I participate at Eka's Portal (https://aryion.com/#show-forum-tree).

You must login (register) to review.