Reviewer: wenwen222 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2020 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 18: Freedom

I loved the giantess sequences in this chapter. The body-scape sequences are top-notch. They are a great read. I love the differences between the sizes, micro is my absolute favorite size. 

I noticed a parallel between Maria negotiating deals at work, and with Tom. It’s interesting how Maria maneuvers her way through “deals,” in her crazy life. Intriguing how the story builds her up and treats her as a main character. The gigantic hot chick gets some development, while we are also rooting for Tommy to survive too. It’s sad to see Tom slowly lose everything around him, but sharing Maria must truly suck for him. 

The Cassidy/Rebecca sequences are awesome. I was going to ask if we could get more action from those two. And then I read the new chapter! Great stuff. I thought Cassidy’s curiosity towards Tom was a one-off thing. But it turns out she wants more!  I’m hoping for more action with them. Maybe we can see some action with Tom’s gigantic sister too! 

It’s cool to see new technology at play. The PAV ship is so awesome. It reminds me of the spherical ship from the movie “Inner-space.” A metallic gray-colored bead, is what I’m picturing every time Tom flies around in his pellet. I like when this 0-88 mile-a-second, ultra-durable ship, smacks into the skin of a lady; it only causes them to itch.

I’m really reaching here. But I had this idea how Bill can get his comeuppance for messing with Tom’s super hot babe. A Micronaut-sized super hot (let’s say, almost a copy of Maria) female Micronaut scientist has to show Tommy how to use tiny technology. She uses a shrink ray to shrink human scaled tools/advanced space machinery, down for Micro use. Maybe as a way to get back at Maria, Tom has sex with the female scientist. And somehow Maria is aware of it, (maybe Tom leaves the microphone on, and Maria hears them fucking, something like that) and she starts getting jealous. How a random chick gets to enjoy her buff husband, while she is stuck with him as a speck of dust. This prompts Maria to compete with the speck of dust in order to, “win over Tom.” And maybe as the female scientist is working at their home, teaching Tom about Micronaut tech (and sex), Maria gets a hold of the shrink ray. Since she feels she’s going to need it against Bill. Maybe he goes off the rails and tries to take advantage of Maria, (Or Maria finds out that Bill is plotting to kill Tom, to get her to stay with him) but she uses the shrink ray, and Bill slowly shrinks down into a micronaut, over the course of a week. Maria then gets the upper hand and swallows Bill out of spite; and because I love me some vore. (That chapter with Tom climbing inside Maria’s mouth to get the piece of shrimp is awesome)

These were just some ideas flying around in my head. I am of course, actively anticipating how you continue the story

Reviewer: MacroGod Signed [Report This]
Date: December 06 2020 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: Freedom

What another steaming hot chapter! I absolutely LOVE the size difference between Tommy and everyone else now. I honestly hope this story never ends because there's so much stuff I'd love to see like:

 

• More torment from Becca and Cassidy
• More of Maria getting off to how insignificant Tommy is now
• A forced threesome between Maria and Bill
• Tommy vs Bill's giga-skycraper sized monster cock
• Some one-on-one solo torment/humiliation from Bill
• Maybe even a little foot content with Tommy (from a male or female)
• And definitely more body exploration!

 

Honestly this story/universe is so fucking hot and fun, and has endless potential, especially when it's written by one of the greatest writers of all time! Thank you so much for contuining to blow us away with this masterpiece, Minuss!

Reviewer: ittybittyman Signed [Report This]
Date: November 29 2020 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 18: Freedom

The king returns! Amazing chapter as always. The only thing I didn't like is that there's only one more chapter and an epilogue left haha. 

 

Can't wait to see how Maria gets him out. Or who else finds/bumps into him in there