Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: August 24 2016 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 6: The Pace Quickens

I'm not a slow-shrink fan, but I'm really enjoying this one!  You've really hit the sweet spot in keeping the size-difference vivid and fresh without becoming repetitive. You also do an excellent job providing views into each of the main characters' perspectives while keeping them distinct. I love seeing many different women have their own individual reactions to encountering a shrunken man. From a fetish standpoint I understand why most of the women in this story quickly get into it. It makes less sense that Maria and Tommy would so easily fall into a mother-child dynamic, but they seem over that now.

Given all the other accommodations, I'm surprised more micronauts' partners haven't asked to be shrunken, as well. Or at least some micronauts should partner with each other. I wouldn't mind a glimpse of a female micronaut and her male partner (or a Fm-Mf swinger foursome).

Also, if Tommy is an ex-SEAL, he was in the Navy with Amy, not the Army.