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Reviewer: zephilia Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 6

Awesome story. There were no spelling/grammar mistakes. I also do not mind a slow build up, it adds depth and flavor to a story. Keep up the great work.



Author's Response:

Thanks much.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: June 14 2016 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

I thought that the worst that could possibly happen would be her mom making educational videos so that other families don't blah blah blah, but no, he just *had* to bite...

Author's Response:

Hehe. He was ready to get the heck out of there.

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