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Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 2

You describe what it's actually like to be in her shoe so well. I was thinking he might get out and Melissa would secretly see him and casually keep him for herself. Maybe next time.
Great story,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Glad to hear it was convincing. Luckily for Mark, Melissa's actually not a psychopath like many of my giantess characters.

Reviewer: HectorVanDyne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 26 2016 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 2

Did she scream simply because she was surprised to see her brother? 



Author's Response:

It was because she realized he'd been inside her shoe the whole time.

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 25 2016 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 2

If you keep writing about nice siblings, Carly is gonna get you.



Author's Response:

Implying Carly is NOT nice? I think she'd call herself 'tough but fair.'

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