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Reviewer: microscopic boy Signed [Report This]
Date: January 15 2017 4:59 PM Title: 1st Period – A Bad Day Begins –

prefect

 

please continue

Reviewer: microscopic man Signed [Report This]
Date: September 05 2016 3:11 PM Title: 1st Period – A Bad Day Begins –

very good

please went into more detail

Reviewer: Bananaman1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: May 01 2016 3:23 PM Title: 1st Period – A Bad Day Begins –

I like the concept and size, but there are a lot of grammatical errors. Personally, I think it would be good if you slowed down the plot a bit and went into more detail, but you could do very well at this pace.

Author's Response:

yeah I wrote this like 2am and really can't think of what to add next. still thank you for the feedback :)

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