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Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 17 2016 10:44 PM Title: Murphy's Law

Good chapter. Very tense. I'm claustrophobic, so the idea of swealtering inside a stuff animal is absolutely miserable to me. Not that Josh has a choice!



Author's Response:

True there isn't much choice like being hidden in a sleeping bag with a hungry grizzly looking for you. :)

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 16 2016 6:28 PM Title: Murphy's Law

There was another story where a dwarf got to hide in a stuffed animal in a giant girl's room. However, this is my first time seeing a tiny man the size of inches hiding inside a stuffed animal.

The other story the girl was hugging the animal and sleeping with it like a teddy bear. I bet this story has other creative ways for this girl to play with her orca.

How big is the orca? A baseball size? Golfball? Soccerball, or what?

To answer Josh's question, let's just say that there is a reason why the orcs is a bit worn out, hehe.

Duggernaut, I bet you had fun writing about this stealthy maneuver. It sure has that suspense feeling every time he sees the girl. It fits your style of writing too, with all these cliffhangers.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The orca is about 12" long from nose to tail. i did think it was a clever turn...but thzat's just my hubris talking. Yes I am very much enjoying this story at present. there will be another update in two days. The next couple chapters are roughed in and I'm trying to keep it exciting.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed [Report This]
Date: May 16 2016 5:28 PM Title: Murphy's Law

Does she have any motive for shrinking men other than fun?



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to give this story a read. Honestly I haven't devised a motivation for why she does it. I am always open to suggestions. Thanks

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