Date: April 02 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder who else will show up at this beach party I look forward to chapter 3
Date: April 02 2016 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was never much of a talker, so i don't comment as much. I do enjoy your stories.
I like the story so far and happy to see that it wont get violent and there will be no killing going on.
Date: March 29 2016 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
An intriguing opener, all right. But, why not (in the words of Deborah Law) split the difference? The beauty of a multiverse (as so superbly portrayed on last night's FLASH/SUPERGIRL crossover) is the literally infinite possibilities! In the case of this story? You could have the party be refreshingly peaceful on mainstream Sizeloa. But, a chapter or two later, you could have the bored GTS-goddesses go to a parallel-Sizeloa and instigate something between the counterpart Deians and Megans!
Just spit-balling, though.