Date: May 24 2016 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 1: In Production
Very well done! Usually with stories of this nature people skip over the details and just get to the end which is always a disappointment. So glad you took your time and really thought his story out, the detials in the final chapter really set the scene. I look forward to whatever you write next -
especially if it involves machines and disposable products ;)
Date: March 15 2016 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1: In Production
Since my favourite genre is transformation, I've always wanted a story about being transformed in a factory, being helpless as a conveyer belt sends you to your doom.
Thank you for making a story just like my imagination. I can't wait till the next chapters.
Live Well and Write On ~TheSmitty
Date: March 14 2016 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 1: In Production
I'm really impressed with this story!! First off it's very unique I can't recall a story with a situation like this.. I feel it woill go into a wonderfull unaware situation. This is a subject not many write about but I wish they would I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! I wonder if he will be discovered or used?? I'm not sure of I should feel envious of him or pity him.. If I said I've never thought about this situation I'd be tellling a lie..Keep up the awesome job and this fantastic story. :)
Date: March 12 2016 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 1: In Production
I see the M/m tag and I am super excited to build up to that point!
I may have got things wrong, as I'm still finding my feet here.
M/m doesn't mean M becomes m? M/m means M somehow owns or dominates m?
Date: March 11 2016 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 1: In Production
Even this isnt tagged as transformation and it's no real transformation, I still love it and see it like it. I am a huge fan of TF combined with unfortunate endings, humiliation, shrinking, watersports, scat, irony and sarcasm. For your first story this is amazing, Really brilliant and unique plot idea. Good TF plots are so damn rare on here, keep it up man. One issue I saw though was, you said he was shrunk half his size by the shrinking light? That wouldnt really get him the size of a tampon, no? I also like smaller shrinking sizes way more, though this totlaly got my attention and will follow it. I would love seeing you write more in the future, maybe get on the TF train, someone turning into a single sheet of toilet paper, or inside the back area of some panties. Totally looking forward for chapter 2!! Giving you 10 stars for this, because I found it so damn hot to read the shrinking and "tf" part of the unfortunat eguy becoming a tampon.
He held onto the pole, and so spent much longer in the light than usual. :)
Thank you for the kind comments.