Date: March 27 2016 11:18 PM Title: 'Cuz She Was Bored
Finally caught up on reading several chapters. All very good. Don't have any good ideas. But just keep doing what you are doing, it's awesome.
Finally caught up on writing this response. I appreciate everybody's input, and to go honest, you guys reviewing are really the ones responsible for the story. Keep it up!
Date: March 27 2016 5:49 PM Title: 'Cuz She Was Bored
Has Andre gotten to really "know" any of his fellow dolls yet? Yeah, crushing them right away in a display of power is fun, but killing acquaintances doesn't do the emotional and mental damage that friends and lovers does.
It's my intention to do character development and connections in the next chapter. I realized that I kind of had more dolls than I needed after posting that chapter so I decided to kill the unnecessary ones. I both remove unnecessary characters, have the characters grow more afraid, and write a pervy scene. Three birds with one stone!