[Report This]Date: February 07 2018 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great to see this story again! Also glad your feeling better. I know how bad those ruts are. Anyway great chapter. Seeing your take on how a society would develop in this world is awesome. I think the Whistler (cool and original name btw) is a fantastic vehicle for exposition dumping without making it boring or monotonous. The new hints about Gaelin really have me interested in what he did to earn such ire and respect from various people and have them give such different reactions. Im also glad Tayell came back and I feel like you captured his age perfectly. I loved his interactions with Annallya. The young awkward boy enameled with the older woman and he has no idea how to talk to her but just stare. Poor kid. Falls in love and she turns out to be a titan... ain't that a kick in the head.
Really excited to see how Annallya and her mentor get out of this delema. Great work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for this comment Viceguard. I really love it when a reader picks up on the little details I put into this, such as the different reactions the villagers have towards Gaelin. There's usually a reason behind every action a character makes, and even if it's not revealed why yet, I have to make sure every action is consistent with their character. So to have someone notice that makes me feel like I'm doing things right. And thank you as well for enjoying the world that I'm building.
Although I can't take all of the credit. The Whistler is not as original a name as you think. Obscure maybe, but I actually took it from somewhere. It's part of the easter egg I was talking about. Really the entire character is an easter egg. ;)
And finally, thank you so much for your kind words. When I started this story, I was afraid no one would like it because it focused more on world building and character development over erotic gts action and destruction. I plan to throw a bit of that in here and there, but I thought most readers would find it too boring. So to read all of these reviews is unbelieveable. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: February 07 2018 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's great that you haven't given up on this series, keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Now that I've got my motivation back, I plan to keep writing this so long as there are people who plan to read it. Thank you for being one of them HABERZphantom
Date: February 06 2018 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well here's an old one back from the past! Glad to see you hadn't lost interest! And life happens my dude, I'm guilty of not finishing stories on other sites so I wouldn't feel bad about it. Good luck with the rest!
Author's Response:
Thank you MadHatter. I never lost interest, only motivation. Now I'm back, and I'm looking to complete this one. Not right away, of course. I've still got some ideas I need to pour into this. Thank you for reading and liking it. It means a lot
Date: February 06 2018 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent stuff! Lots of great world building, neat character interactiobs and a well done cliffhanger at the end! Couldnt really ask for more than that! My favorite part was the story the Whistler told and how Annallya reacted to it. I also like how things have finally come full circle, its about time she found out what that mother of hers has been upto!
Author's Response:
Thank you very much geeman. I've tried hard to build a good world in this story, and it means a lot to hear that it's paying off. Expect the next chapter to not take half a year. Maybe a week, give or take a few days
Date: February 06 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I’m really glad you’re back. I totally understand that you needed time to yourself and I’m glad that you found your strength to continue writing this wonderful story. Keep going because I will support this story straight to the end, even if it takes 100 years.
Author's Response:
Thank you Jessica. I'm honored to hear you think my story is wonderful. When I began writing it, I thought everyone would think it's too boring because there would be more story than erotic giantess action. So it means a lot to hear that you're enjoying the world that I'm building up. It's always been a dream of mine to write a fantasy story, maybe even a series, that stars a giantess
Date: February 06 2018 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
I’m really glad you’re back. I totally understand that you needed time to yourself and I’m glad that you found your strength to continue writing this wonderful story. Keep going because I will support this story straight to the end, even if it takes 100 years.
Date: February 06 2018 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
Welcome back! Glad to see this story continued! Oh and Annallya is in deep trouble.
Author's Response:
Thank you Nostory, my old friend. It's great to be back. And I can promise you that it won't take me half a year to finish the next chapter. Maybe more than a week, but if I can do it in under a week you can be sure that i'll try. Sometimes the words flow out of me, other times they drip like a leaky sink.