[Report This]Date: December 23 2017 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a breth of fresh air this story is. Focused on plot and chariter devliopment this series is a joy to read. This site does (in my optionion) a poor job of showing good and creative storyies to to the communityu so sady it was dumb luck that I bumbed into this and im so glad I did. I love Annallya! Shes sweet and powerful, and her chariter has changed siginifactly as the story has progresed. Her views on the little humans that scurry about her feet are diffrent than the virews she had at the start of this story. Due to the fact that her ideas now clash with her society as a whole it will be intersting to see how her identity progresses after this. Will she make new converts or will she be ostrocised? If I ever got sucked into her demetion id pray that I would bump into her. I cant wait to see how the author progresses the conflict building between her and her fellow Titans, it sure it will be challaging. I Noticed that this story has not been updated in a long time so I truly hope that its author is still active. Keep uip the incradable work!
Author's Response:
I realize that I have not been around in a long while. I'm truly sorry to you and everyone else who has abandoned this story because I disappeared from the grid. That needs to change. Thank you so much for your heartfelt comment, as it was a wake up call. It's time to get back to work.
[Report This]Date: September 11 2017 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
Just checking back to see if there's been any updates, as it's been 4 months now since the last chapter. I know real life gets in the way, but just hope it hasn't been dropped, and that everything's okay. It's a great story -- my favorite here! :)
[Report This]Date: June 09 2017 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Just read Chapter 9. Another great chapter. Wish someone could kidnap you and put you in a mountain cabin for the summer so you can write the entire story... hate having to wait for more! :) But keep up the great work. You do the story proud by taking the time to develop the characters and write a real story.
Date: June 03 2017 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Is this story still active? Please don't leave unfinished like this, it's such a cruel thing to do.
Date: May 30 2017 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
I've been following this story and thinking of the two protags so much that I forgot about Andril, but as soon as I read the part where it switched to Annallya's mother i knew it was gonna get intense. I like how you added the contrpl of her height in there as well. Overall, pretty damn good. Side note: ypu have wear, as in clothes and expected damage to parts of machines or clothes, and ware as in sales like 'The peddler's wares were secondhand.'
Date: May 21 2017 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 9
Interesting twist. When Annallya answered Gaelin's question, I thought she was pulling his leg and would reveal she was joking. But apparently, she's naive enough to believe that. The last scene confirmed my suspicion and now I can't wait to see Annallya learn the truth.
Date: May 20 2017 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 9
I've been following this story and thinking of the two protags so much that I forgot about Andril, but as soon as I read the part where it switched to Annallya's mother i knew it was gonna get intense. I like how you added the contrpl of her height in there as well. Overall, pretty damn good. Side note: ypu have wear, as in clothes and expected damage to parts of machines or clothes, and ware as in sales like 'The peddler's wares were secondhand.'
Date: May 20 2017 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOving all of this. The Titan reproduction story sounds like a myth, to cover up perhaps the kidnap and rape of human men.
[Report This]Date: May 19 2017 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 9
Whoa! First we get the PG explanation at the top and then we get the REAL explanation at the bottom there. Mistress Rhaolin don't screw around, I feel bad for Andrill but it was pretty sexy too, can't deny it.