Date: February 21 2017 12:28 PM Title: Fated meetings
OK so the only reason I haven't left a review lately is because I haven't read every chapter. The last one I read was when Lily revealed Claire her tragic past and you know I'm a big Lily fan ;). And the only reason I didn't finish reading was becuase I'm afraid to finish reading these awesome chapters so quickly lol I know it sounds weird but that's me personally. Please, please, please don't let a lack of reviews discourage you from writing because your story is sooo good. It's not just a fetish story but it has such dramatic depths to it invovling Claire and the girls.
Author's Response:
I appreciate you telling me this, but don't worry ^,^
The community stepped up and told me what they think of my work and honestly it's calmed my nerves tremendously. I'll keep posting chapters till the final words part!
Thank you for leaving me your thoughts, i'm glad you like Lily, she was a tricky girl to write about. :3
Date: February 21 2017 10:03 AM Title: What We'll Do...
Oooo! Great chapter! Another long one to enjoy. I was wondering when Claire's and the Twin's stories would finally intertwine and I love the way they did. The interaction between them in the final few moments gave me chills. I can't wait for the next one! :3
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it MarsyMan. A simple moment, but it was enough to throw the twins off :P
Thank you for reviewing, i'll try to have another chapter up when i can.
[Report This]Date: February 19 2017 10:31 PM Title: Why We're Here...
I'm sorry to hear that, I meant to write a review sooner but was really tight on time there, though it seems like more people have left their impression since the last time, nice.
Moving on this chapter, I misinterpreted the last chapter and thought that Amelia was able to hear what happened in that memory, seems ike it wasn't like that. Is nice that at this point everything fell into place and now the family seems to be closer than ever, and that's really good, even inf the way until that point was really painful. Really well done.
I'm eager to finally now about the plan next time.
Author's Response:
Thank you Kenta, i'm sorry if i gave off the impression i did. The Twins arn't as powerful as they currently are now. In the past, it was trial and error, as seen by Alexis showing her mother their memories. A new chapter should be coming up soon, so thank you for reviewing, you've consitantly done so and that really makes me feel better about my writing. I can't wait to show you all whats to ocme. the twins story isn't over yet.
[Report This]Date: February 16 2017 12:34 AM Title: Why We're Here...
Like a few others I as well have not been as vocal in how much I love this story. I greatly missed it during the holiday season and was super happy to see you return. I love the story and cant wait to see whats next. Tho i am wondering since Claire has everyones trust will they keep her small?
Author's Response:
I'm glad to hear that Afroking :D
Since Claire has already earned their trust you would think she'd be in the clear, but don't think it's over just yet. The twins still have a hand to play, especially regarding her size.
Date: February 15 2017 10:20 PM Title: Why We're Here...
I wouldn't sell yourself short. I largely lurk around here because critical reviews of fetish stories just seem odd to me but I've been enjoying this.
Author's Response:
Thank you then for coming out of lurking to tell me that. To us writers we love when people tell us what thye think and even a couple words of encouragement is enough to make our days. So thank you again.
Date: February 15 2017 2:58 PM Title: Fated meetings
Hey don't lose faith. I'm not as vocal as I should be about good stories so I'll try to fix that in the future but I'm always looking for updates for this one lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for that MadHatter, this makes me feel a lot better. :)
I'll try to have a new chapter up soon.
Date: February 15 2017 12:19 PM Title: Why We're Here...
Thank you so much for continuing this. Been reading for a while but only recently made an account here so I couldn't really review. Anyway, I love this story. The setup, characters and the way each girl is developed and each succeeds in being individually unique and interesting is extremely impressive and the dedication it must take to write 5000+ chapters is even more-so. It all pays off anyway. I'm thoroughly enjoying the series and I'm looking forward to the next chapters. ;)
Author's Response:
T-T thank you so much for your words MarsyMan, they really do make me feel better about my writing and it feels good to know i'm not just dragging a story along that no one wants to read. Thank you so much for taking your time to say that to me, i really do appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: February 12 2017 8:00 PM Title: What They are...
Finally I could get free time to do some reading! It's been a while, really.
I'm really interested in the twins' past and how it'll go from here, since it seems far from over, and how will this end up with them meeting Claire.
It's really sad how it ended for them at this point since they didn't really have much of an option after discovering what Tom was trying to do with Amelia. Hopefully she can think this calmer later, though, what she did seems like a natural first reaction no matter how painful that sounds.
Author's Response: T~T KentaRyu! I missed your reviews ;-; was so sad when no one else reviews my story. I'm glad not all my fans are gone. I'll be working post haste to have new chapter up soon. FW is helping me with it now! And yes, the twins story is far from over. I wanted to maybe put part 1 but I decided against it. Each chapter is unique and I can't clump them if I wanted to. Thank you so much for reviewing you have no idea how happy I am to see this. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: December 10 2016 11:30 AM Title: Fated meetings
I rated five stars hope you got them cause my tablet is being dumb (it gives less stars when I select 5 for some strange reason), also thanks for recommending my story to Franchise. Keep up the good work cause this story definitely deserves five stars.
[Report This]Date: November 20 2016 3:21 AM Title: The calm before the storm
Well, that was a long one.
Good job writing Claire's past. She had such a terrible time, one can see where her strength when confronting the girls' problems come from. But, if this was just the calm before the storm, I can't even imagine what is to come.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter, since it seems it'll be ful, of revelations.
Author's Response:
Yah, i was worried it was to long. I knew where to go with this chapter but i kept having second doubts on how to play it out. It by far was the most taxing to write, but, i think it turned out good :)
As for whats to come... yeah, i shouldn't even hint at it. I think you'll be surprised my friend.
Hope to post again soon, but, it might be a bit. please be patiant with me >.<
Date: November 19 2016 12:06 PM Title: Fated meetings
This is a really good story! When the Sophia said lily was at 25% I literally felt a chill go down my spine! lol! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much Nothingness. I appreciate your words of encouragement :)
[Report This]Date: October 28 2016 11:24 PM Title: The truth about trust...
Wonderful as always. Hope I'll be able to share my thoughts soon, for everything I've read. Lily and Kat become two of my dearests.
And I feel there will be more to Claire, things she isn't even aware. And I have an unease feeling about this. If so, I'm glad everyone is together to be with her, as much as Claire was with them at the moments they needed most.
Author's Response:
I appreciate the review, thank you :)
Claires story isn't quite over, only just coming to light now...
Date: October 25 2016 11:23 AM Title: The truth about trust...
I can't speak for anyone else; but the way I read the stories on this site is to copy them over on my computer to read later. Sometimes I forget to comment. The reason I copy the stories over is because I find the text formating on this site to be a bit harsh to read; where as on Word I can edit things to a format I more comfortable with.
I started your story months ago and really liked it. Since then I've simply been copying chapters over to read once a bunch are done. As of this chapter it works out to 226 pages with the font and text size I use on Word. That makes for a much more fulfilling read rather than the constant cliff-hanger style on this site.
I just wanted you to know that lack of feedback doesn't necessarily mean lack of interest and enjoyment. Keep up the great work!!!
Author's Response:
Your words calm me, thank you for that :)
My greatest concern is always if people won't enjoy my story. I want to make people happy so i try my best to format them properly, but i guess you have a point. This site has had some issues when i tried posting directly from word, so i always have to copy and paste and that gets messy.
[Report This]Date: October 22 2016 3:47 AM Title: The truth about trust...
New chapter, nice.
I found the start quite cute, with the drooling scene and Kat and Lily's interaction.
Lily's warning gave me a bit to think about so I was relieved to confirm again at the next scene that the twin's love for Claire is completely real. I still got no idea about their plan nor at what happened before the story began but as long as their care for the worker is real I think everything will work out, somehow.
I'm also happy to see that the twins gave the first step in the path to reconciliate with Lily. It might take a while but the hope is still there.
And not much to say about the final part. The little talk with Claire and the other three girls was heartwarming, and with everyone reunited again, it's time to reveal a bit more of the truth, looking forward to that.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it KentaRyu, and i will confirm, the Twins do in fact love Claire, that wasnt my intention of misguiding people with Lily's words :(
[Report This]Date: October 02 2016 11:38 PM Title: Kat fight,
i just love this story.I love kat, her story being my fav.looking forward to what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review Afroking :) Kat was a personal favorite of mine as well, not that I don't enjoy all the girls mind you :3
[Report This]Date: September 25 2016 10:57 PM Title: Kat fight,
I have fewer time to post my thoughts lately with classes, life and such, especially now with each wonderful chapter that play with my feelings in such a way and I have more to think about.
Reading a story is like offering ourselves to the author, to the world they create, and allowing him/her to do whatever they want with us. It's like a hidden agreement. And this is the most wonderful thing that can happen, the unknow, to not expect things to happen, often never be prepared and our feelings not go as we expect. The surprise. That moment I get myself suddenly crying because of reasons. It's not our world. We're living the world you created. Playing with our emotions is the most amazing thing to feel, and why we enjoy so much stories that managed to do this and finds a special place in our mind.
All I can say is that this story is one of the few things that make my month happier, and whenever I have free time, I get myself thinking about it.
Author's Response:
Thanks a lot for your words LJin. A feelings as great as that comes from writing for others as well. Having our own little world, just ready to be explored. Hidden things only we can foresee, but yet others never stop to try and see for themselves. When we know we can make people stop and really question whats going on around them. To have them wonder why this is that, or that is this. Its the little details that throw people off that truly cause me enjoyment ^,^ And i hope i'll be able to keep this up just a bit longer, until the final scene drops, and the story, comes to a fold. A appreciate you taking time out of your busy day to review, so thank you once again :)
[Report This]Date: September 25 2016 1:21 AM Title: Kat fight,
This was a relaxing chapter, compared to the last ones, not that there's anything bad with it, I think it's good to have some peace after the storm.
I'm happy to see that Lily is starting to get more control over herself and some calm, hopefully is just the start of the road for a more peaceful life. She also was adorable in this chapter, couldn't avoid being charmed by the little one.
Kat too was a nice surprise in here, she's also making some progress on her own, being able to befriend Lily like that. The two of the make a really cute and funny duo. Is also nice that she was able to see Claire now, should've been a huge relief for her after their last encounter and knowing that the '´pretty lady' was going to spend the night with Lily.
And of course the last scene with the shrinking was adorable, surely Claire is getting to enjoy this more since there's not imminent danger for now.
Looking forward to the next one, the questions about Claire and her past keep piling up and that just makes me more interested.
Author's Response:
I'm glad i can keep you intrigued KentaRyu, things will seem to clear in the upcoming chapters but i hope for now you'll be patiant with me xD
Once again thank your for your review, it means the world to me to know your thoughts on the events going on. :)
[Report This]Date: September 24 2016 9:03 PM Title: Fated meetings
I'm still reading too buddy! Great character development and the story is keeping me intrigued!!! Hope to see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks a bunch Zbh :D I hope i'll have a new chapter soon to give to you guys!
Date: September 24 2016 12:23 PM Title: Kat fight,
hey you haven't lost me as a fan lol. anytime I see an update for this one I smile. the Conext and character development has been so good and I am just here for the story at this point and that's crazy for a site like this lol
Author's Response:
You have no idea how much that means to me :) I'm glad i can give you something you can enjoy and i hope i'll be able to keep at it until the very end ^,^
[Report This]Date: September 12 2016 4:43 PM Title: Fated meetings
I actually meant not done with Claire yet. I think the reason why Lily said she's like her will be another cause of sorrow for the poor worker.
Author's Response:
Ahh, well i can safely say without any spoiling, we are most certainly not done, her past has yet to be truly discovered and with the upcoming chapters you'll soon find out just why that is.