[Report This]Date: September 12 2016 5:07 AM Title: Burdens of a lost girl,
Well, that was fast. I didn't believe it when I saw the next chapter was up.
This chapter was really good and made a lot of progress with Lily's character. We get to see again more of the extent of her powers as well as most of her past. Lily's life is really painful. In the last chapter it was already pretty bad but this one took it to a completely different scale. I hope she can manage to find some peace and happiness soon, maybe with Claire's help.
Claire finally managed to make some progress with Lily in her own way, though this time she almost costed it her life in the process. There was a little hint from Lily there about Claire's past, which makes me think we aren't done with her either.
By the way, I don't think the ending of the last previous chapter was bad at all.
Author's Response:
Thank you KentaRyu, i appreciate that a lot xD I was really worried i pissed some people off with it.
As for us being done with Lily, i'd say we're far from it. That being said, we arn't truly done with any of the girls just yet. Many things still haven't been explained and i'm hoping you stick around to see what will, and what won't be revealed next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: September 11 2016 1:51 PM Title: Burdens of a lost girl,
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I had read the first part few days ago, but couldn't post my thoughts yet, had to take a break.
Now when I thought I was ready, I come to find this and my heart couldn't take it, another blow, even more stronger. I need more time ... However, thankfully, the ending made me smile and cry. And won't leave me so anguished like before. Want so much for Lily to find her happiness.
Author's Response:
I had missed your reviews Ljin, they were some of the greatest i read :)
Thank you for taking the time to tell me this, and i'm sorry for playing with your emotions. All I can tell you though, is it's far from over~
[Report This]Date: September 11 2016 9:53 AM Title: Burdens of a lost girl,
That was one of the darkest things I've ever read her but things are looking up at least.
Author's Response:
This chapter, was by far, the hardest for me to write because i knew how much it was going to hurt. There will be more anguish in the future, but still, i just couldnt, take it. Thank you for the review AdamX