Wowie, this is well-written. I read a bit, in the middle actually, haven't gone through the beginning. 

So, wow. Good stuff, I want to say. I don't think I'll ever finish it, due to my abject hatred of the omnipotence fetish, and that's not ragging on you or anyone who likes it, that's purely me. I think I'll be recommending this though, and definitely looking through your works. 

I love this story so much!! Are you going to do a sequel or something?

I’m sad to see this finish. Seriously. This has been one of those special stories that knock it out of the park. One of those that you’ll randomly find scouring the website that you’d binge all the way through. I’ve loved this and a bit gloomy to see it go. I’m going to miss it.

However, I wanted to wait to right my final review on the Epilogue instead oof the fiinal chapter so I could do this:

As a tribute, I wrote a review of the entire story. It’s in third person written as if it was for someone who had never read it, meaning I’m keeping it vague for spoilers. (It’s easier to relay my opinions that way without going too overboard. I actually had to cut stuff out when it went over 700 words and I seemed like I was droning on :P)

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I first saw this story on the most recent page around a year ago. Sitting there with its secrets. Waiting for it to be read and unveiled….

Well, it didn’t really have that much of a mystical build up. But, still.

I started reading through it quite casually. Not that engaged but still holding my interest - thinking it was an alright story with some decent characters.

But as I continued to read on, the story revealed itself to be a very well set-up and structured storyline with genuinely interesting characters. Each chapter set up in a way that each of the leads and supporting are developed individually and have them be the focus of their own segment. Comparable to TV shows like Skins - where each episode is from the perspective of a different cast member. In this roster there is:

Kat – A seemingly kind/innocent girl who talks about herself in the third person and has an adoration towards cats. Taking up their mannerisms and appearance.

May – An innocent but clumsy girl whom is the most balanced morally.

Kai – An eccentric and overly uncaring for her own hygiene.

Lily (Or Lilith) – A cruel and unforgiving girl with her own set of seemingly flawed moral code.

And Sophia and Alexis – Two blonde and mysterious identical twins who share their appearance with the uncanny twins from The Shining and seem to be able to exploit everything around them at will.

All of whom attend the same day-care and all share a unique pass-time...

Each girl has their own time to shine and are fleshed out well enough that you begin to understand that they’re all flawed in their own right. Opening up to the main character, and in-turn, the reader.

Speaking of which, what separates Precious Little Demons from those TV shows is that it doesn’t switch perspectives. It’s all tied together and told from the point of view of our main character; Claire. Who may at first may appear to only be a catalyst for the story to ensue, but is shown to have some demons of her own. As she gradually becomes a very interesting character in her own right.

And like I said, you grow to care for the equally (Totally not equally, Kat is my favourite) and know their goals but also their limitations.

I got incredibly enticed and hooked during those first few days of that I even read a few chapters on the train and stayed up some days reading well into the night. Each of the girls never stopped being interesting and I enjoyed it for how it played out.

Sadly though, all things most come to a close. Nothing lasts forever. Although in this story, it’s potentially set up to go on forever. But would I want that? In a way, yes. But ultimately, no. The story is over. I would definitely read short vignettes involving the same characters or a sequel story. But for now. It’s run its course.

And what a good one it’s been…

And it finally draws to an end. :(

All I can say is thanks for writing this story! If you choose not to continue it, perhaps start another and I'll read it. 

Now that they realize they almost became monsters,  maybe they won't shrink people and use them as toys.

i cried... how many times did this story make me cry...im sad to face the conclusion, but this is one damn good story.

It feels good to see stuff fall into place now with most, if not all, of the past revealed. I can see a nice constrast between the twins' attitude towards their friends before and now, saying things like "you must listen and follow us to the tee. If we say jump, you jump" in the past, which aren't exactly the most friendly words. It seems the twins have changed quite some in this time, for good I think.

What Claire and the other girls need now is time to process all this new information and see exactly how the twins have changed their life, specially Claire. Hopefully they can understand their reasons and maybe get to a good point in their relationship, I'm looking forward to see how all of this develops.

Now, sorry if this has been told before and I forgot about it but, Lily's wish hasn't been revealed yet, right? What about Lily's commentary on her and Claire being more similar than the older one thinks, was that because of both being part of the twins' scheme?

Great job as always.

They may have the power to do anything they want, and to punish anyone they want, but do they have the right to? They used thier "friends" and now they must reap the "rewards".

So did they erase her memory of meeting them the first time or not? I assumed when they first said they had met her before that something bad happened and the twins wiped or changed her memory and she doesn't seem to react to any of it until the whole story is told. Look at me, questioning potential plot holes on GW lol.

Again, that was fast. It hasn't really been long since my last message.

For the twins even after getting all that knowledge to get to experience the human narute again, and see that that kind of behavior isn't just a limited case like with his father but a most frequent thing than we would like it to be should be quite shocking, of course it would make them doubt their effort. Though it's admirable that they still wanted to follow with their objective, even if not by the best means.

It was also quite interesting story to see the first interaction between the twins and Claire, is was really eager while reading. Sadly it wasn't in the best moment for them. Or maybe it was? Since it seems that'll open a oportunity for them to interact much more than they would on a regular situation.

The part in which Claire thought they finally would talk to her, when they were just leaving, that was quite sad for me.

Keep up the good work.