[Report This]Date: May 07 2016 7:54 AM Title: Through The Day
Hoping Melissa gets a little friend to play with!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2016 8:36 PM Title: Shoe Weather
Man! How absent-minded can this girl get?
[Report This]Date: May 02 2016 1:39 PM Title: Not Quite Siri...Start of a Heat Wave
Oh, I think Mel texted legibly enough. Crystal just pretended to "misunderstand."
[Report This]Date: May 02 2016 9:48 AM Title: Night Before
Good to see this story again.
Wonder if Crystal will forget about Melissa.
[Report This]Date: March 26 2016 4:06 PM Title: Communication/Say Wha??
Nice chapter! Loving the focus on feet and sneakers. Hope to see some sexy fun and foot worship!
Author's Response:
I will take that into consideration. I have not looked back into the story for a while but I think I might do something with Kinsey. She has that additude to love foot rubs ever once in a while.
[Report This]Date: March 24 2016 3:44 PM Title: Communication/Say Wha??
An update? What a nice gift for Easter! :-)
Seriously, though: it's nice that Crystal has found Melissa and that Mel has thought of a totally plausible way to make herself intelligible. I just have one question.
What does Kinsey look like? ;-)
Author's Response:
Ill have to explain what she looks like. sometime in the story. Who knows where Melissa will end up. Gotta keep attention hooked somehow.
Date: February 20 2016 10:58 PM Title: Wash But No!
Well, I'm not normally fond of novel-length unawareness. But, thus far, Melissa's misadventures have made me smile. So, rest assured, I'll tune in for chapter 4.
Author's Response:
I will throw a loop into this chapter.
[Report This]Date: February 20 2016 2:11 PM Title: Roomates!
A G-rated unaware story? No wonder you've only gotten two reviews, so far. OW!*
*Imaginary lawyer Izzy Serious literally slaps me with an injunction against any further utterance of such back-handed compliments. ;-)
Author's Response:
Its what I like writing. I hope you like the story though.
Date: February 16 2016 7:12 PM Title: Night Before
I already like where this is going, hope it remains unaware! Action went by a little fast, but granted it was only the first chapter so it's understandable. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Author's Response:
I guess we will see if Brianna throws Melissa in with the Laundry or not. We will also see if more characters from the last story become more involved.