[Report This]Date: January 10 2016 9:43 AM Title: Giving In
This is good.. THIS IS DAMN GOOD!!!! PLEASE KEEP THEM COMING!
[Report This]Date: January 05 2016 10:19 AM Title: Giving In
Sorry forgot to rate the story.
Date: January 05 2016 9:10 AM Title: Giving In
Great story so far. There are very errors few, that I have seen. Im wondering if Jake will regret being in his mothers shoe? I sence some trouble coming his way soon. Cannot wait for the next chapter.
Date: January 01 2016 1:54 PM Title: Giving In
Oh, man. I thought he was gonna get away with it, but he had to fall asleep. He's in for a rough morning.
[Report This]Date: January 01 2016 1:50 PM Title: Giving In
great chapter. keep up the awesome work.
Date: January 01 2016 12:11 PM Title: Giving In
Welp, he's fucked
[Report This]Date: January 01 2016 12:07 PM Title: Giving In
You have such a good talent with humiliation I love the story. Amazin work for it's your first story man!! Unaware ass stuff is my absolute favorite, that would be the best shit, literally, ever to see it happen in the story too. Or maybe you keep it for your next story and totally make out a pure ass plot with it, with also character death at the end inside an ass. I also enjoy toilet and scat a lot, I know some other people on here do too so I dont think it will ruffling the feathers :]
Date: January 01 2016 11:51 AM Title: Giving In
Very good chapter. I'm looking forward to reed More!