Reviewer: bailey69 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: February 18 2017 9:20 PM Title: Day 1 - Day 2

THIS IS THE SHITEST STORY I'VE READ! YOU MUST LOVE MISSORY ALOT I SURE DO'NT,PLEASE WRITE SOMETHING WITH MORE FEELING TO IT, AND MORE TO THE STORY YOU JUST STARTED THEN YOU ENDED THERE WAS NO STORY "THE END

Reviewer: six006 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 29 2016 10:38 PM Title: Day 1 - Day 2

hope to see continued, loved this, hot

Reviewer: ILike Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2016 7:42 AM Title: Day 1 - Day 2

please continue this story is so hot!!!!!

Reviewer: mikeesan Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 8:07 PM Title: Day 1 - Day 2

Holy shit again :p The part of wher he swallowed part of her shit smearing inside his mouth and he "tasted" her chili from the day before he ate from too, best humor ever. Would had loved seeing him gag and vomit more maybe after he woked up and his senses suddenly kicked in like wh- where am I *gag* I- or when he swallowed her digested chili remains lol. A funny adding could have been also a undigested kernel inside her shit larger than himself. Please continue this is so hot. 

Reviewer: gtsfan91 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2016 4:44 PM Title: Day 1 - Day 2

What a fantastic second chapter! This story totally is now a favorite of mine. I have not read such amazing ass plot in a long time. The details, pure humiliation, irony and toilet humor is just perfect, please continue like this!! I totally can't think of any criticism, except the boy maybe could had cursed and mocked his step mother after her asking him with a "smile" how his sleep was, and her totally getting annoyed and pissed even more. and him be like no no wa- Im sor-...

I loved so much how you have a great talent of filling the plot and describe the moment. So many authors on here rush and never write out details or enviroments. Your details of what's going on inside the rectum is awesome!! The part where he stick out his head out of the turd and was greated by a "kiss" of her rectal wall, amazing. Things like this totally make the whole plot vivid and the reader can drift into it.

I like the sarcasm of the step mother so much with her dark, evil characteristic, and how she seems to enjoy and like to torture her step son.
The part of her masturbating through her queef canal feeling for her son through inside in her rectum and kneading through, fantastic idea!! And how it lead to the boy having an orgasm too by his penis gets stimulated and erect, so good, so humiliating. Him being in hell and having an orgasm inside his step mothers rectum...

There are so many possibilities of more torture how this could go on. I would love seeing him shrink somehow more, maybe the step mother is behind it or even worse, unaware about it. And the boy becomes a mere "shit speck" lost inside her rectum. And even when his dust particle body would emerge embedded inside a turd she wouldnt see him anymore because of his tiny size. This could be extended so great of his speck body glued on her anus while wiping, a toilet paper pressed to her anus and the poor boy inside between the shit stained paper and her anus, and then she would fart hard against the boy and paper, pressing the toilet paper a bit later inside and drifting it around, letting her anal ring blossom like a flower and swallow the speck again.

Thank you so much for sharing this story. Please write on. It was so much fun already :]