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Reviewer: Scarlett Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 20 2016 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: A New Day

Very well written story. The details you used for the unfortunate boy were remarkable, after he was eaten. I've never seen any other author go as far with describing the perspective of the victim. It is a dark fascination of mine, and something you have fulfilled! I'll be watching for any future works of yours.

Cheers!

Reviewer: combine45 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 21 2016 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 12: A New Day

Ultimatly it was anticlimactic for me. I felt like you set up some grand story where there was going to be a rebellion against a corrupt government and it boiled down to a cruel breakup. I will say the story was very engaging and you delt with the emotions very well, but the story ended up being more about conventional sex than any real interaction between sizes.

To imagine a world like that I guess you can't really blame Nadia for the way she acted, but to fall in love with Ziv so quick... I feel like its breif infatuation and she would grow to detest him after years of marriage. The sex will lose its luster and she will realize ultimatily what a waste it all was. 

I still look forward to your future stories.

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