Giantess World
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 26 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Date: December 26 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
Still a few spelling errors in chapter 4, though. Example: "psycho" instead of "physco" (similar to the classic Ricky Ricardo-ism "physiciatrist").
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Date: December 21 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
[Report This]Date: December 21 2015 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
A brief lapse into first-person viewpoint, when you said "We all slumped upstairs..." instead of "They..." (the pronoun you clearly meant to use).
Other than that, you're building the suspense quite nicely!
Author's Response: Yeah I've been doing it a lot since I usually write in 1st person so it comes naturally to me to write I/we instead of he/they. Thanks for spotting it for me though!