Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2015 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow! First of all, another story?!!! You are on fire, man. Just like this dragon. I just read all 4 chapters, and it is amazing. No need for giantess content right away becuase the story alone is great right now.

Unlike most of your stories, this one features the main characters with a past of suffering and I really care about them.

Usually it's a guy who has taken advantage of people and a giantess gets revenge, but no, this story seems very different. And I love it.

It feels like one is those stories that you can sit by a cozy fire and read aloud to some kids. "There was once a brave knight, and his squire. They went on an adventure to find a dragon." This story has a good holiday feel to it.

Also, does anything else keep thinking that Sir George sounds like a pirate? Like, these lines have like a pirate feel to them and it's funny, becuase every pirate wants all the glory and doesn't fear much. I think Sir George should add some honor of chivalry so I can stop thinking about pirates. Becuase, seriously. When he talks, I keep thinking about a pirate, haha.

My prediction is that the boy now has to go find the dragon on his own, and instead, he finds a giantess. He is scared and points the sword at her, but she thinks he is cute and they have a relationship. The squire then has to return to the village to report any progress but he keeps the giantess part a secret. He returns there everyday, but eventually that one girl from the village gets suspicious and decides to secretly follow him. When she sees the giantess, she screams and runs back to the village. The squire now frightened that the girl will tell the village of the giantess runs back and makes a deal with the girl. The girl reluctantly agrees, but the squire is happy. He continues visiting the giantess, but one day an army of knights show up to kill the giantess. The boy now thinks the girl broke the deal, so he confronts her. She gives him her reason that she likes him and felt jealous that he was with a giantess. Meanwhile, the giantess kills all the Knights, and comes to the village to destroy it. The boy tells the giantess to stop, but she won't listen and that the giantess thinks that the boy tried to kill her. So then she tries to kill the boy, but before she does so, the village girl springs a trap which involves setting the giantess on fire. The giantess runs for her life trying to find water. She does, but not in time as her body is too weak to recover. She dies by the riverbank. The rest of the village cheers for the young girl for her clever trap and the squire thanks her for saving him. She says that she will do anything for him, and she kisses him.

The end. (That's my prediction.)

I will definately follow this story. It has promise.
I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Hi Tom, nice to have you along for another adventure. Interesting predictions, we'll see how close you are, ;)

Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed [Report This]
Date: December 18 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow that took a turn for the worse. Awesome. Chapter the story is getting better and better.