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Reviewer: mullac Signed [Report This]
Date: June 21 2017 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 13 Elevator

I really enjoy these kinds of stories, where the male has just accepted his position - but I accept that it's hard to create conflict when the male just worships the giantess without hesitation.

I'm glad she gave him a bit more ego to keep the story going, but I really enjoyed this chapter. Especially the way she was so disgusted by his love of her.



Author's Response:

Thanks mullac.  I'd say Meg's interested in a toy that fights back some.  Mitch's situation is more or less certain.  Its how he faces it, and what happens if he's presented an open door.  Does he walk thru it?  Or does he stay.  And if so, why?  Is it because he doesn't want to leave or he's realized that he can never be free.  

Reviewer: spgts Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17 2017 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13 Elevator

666 words. A witchy chapter indeed.

I really liked this chapter. The protagonists defiant nature was one of my favorite aspects of the story pre-witch powers. His situation was really fucked up and going poorly for him, but I liked that he was taking steps to figure everything out. So I'm glad Megan has given him some of his spunk back. Frankly I hope it bites her in the ass. In a sexy way of course.

Look forward to more.

Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  

Well, part of Mitch's journey has been loss.  He's lost his wife, Emily.  Then he lost his dignity.  Finally he's been subsumed.  I'm not going to spoil things further.  We're looking at three more chapters, max.  



Author's Response:

Thank you very much.  

Well, part of Mitch's journey has been loss.  He's lost his wife, Emily.  Then he lost his dignity.  Finally he's been subsumed.  I'm not going to spoil things further.  We're looking at three more chapters, max.  

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