Reviewer: ionflame Signed [Report This]
Date: December 25 2015 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

Loving this story so far. I know you've probably already wrote the next chapter but I'm rooting for patty not to find her. Instead, let's have some unaware sex. That's always interesting to see an author write about.

Reviewer: MasterOfMicro Signed [Report This]
Date: December 24 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 - Special Shower

Feet and vag in the same story without vore? Is this dream?

Reviewer: TheDARGX Signed [Report This]
Date: December 12 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 2 - A Jog and a Shower

I think you're doing a good job on the feet stuff, just try and bring a bit more detail & it's perfect! Can't wait for the next chapter. Glad we could all inspire such a talented writer! (:

Reviewer: GuyGoneSmall Signed [Report This]
Date: December 11 2015 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Underfoot and Out of Sight

I am likeing this story alot.  I would love to read about how Mary survives in the shoe.  I already cant wait to read the next chapter.