Reviewer: diesel Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2016 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 16

Fabulous story. Greatly enjoyed the setup. You described each character so well that I could picture them in my mind. The part where first you had the prisoners talking about where they were was great. Then the ladies talking about the men, chilling. Then the ingenious breakout.Dagmara strumming her nails before getting up was also chilling. This is written soooooo well. I can hardly wait for more. I hope she has black pumps on her feet.
Love it,
Diesel

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. I like to set the characters up to establish some context and I am delighted I've managed to convey enough personality into each of the players, male and female, that it makes a decent read. thanks again!