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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 12 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 13

Wait, why did Hector push Cornelius off? Did I miss something, or will his reason be revealed later on?

Hmm. So these giantesses know exactly what is going on. Well, some of these men don't. I think it's time for some females to take the stage now. Let's give this crowd a show.

Also, when did all these men become sophisticated all of a sudden? They are using high vocabulary and and their languange is getting better than when the story started. Feels like a group of scientists are trapped here instead.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

The conversation between Maynard and John was pretty high brow to bring the doctor off his high horse. Hector reason for dispatching Cornelius will be revealed next chapter. As always thanks for the review

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