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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 23 2015 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

"Jack, how do you feel?"

"Well, I am aware that I have been shrunk and surrounded by plastic material to keep me in. Just curious, what kind of experiment is this?"

After a moment of silence, the voice returned. " Jack, you are free to return to your quarters. That will be all for today."

Jack returned back to his room smiling. He knew he outsmarted them. 'Bet they didn't expect that' he chuckled to himself.

The women gathered around after Jack's interview.

"This is impossible!" One of them said. "How could they know? Who told them?!!"

"Relax, if they all knew that they were shrunk, they would be panicking, but they're not. No, Jack is on to something and he doesn't want to let his companions know. We will have to watch him more closely."

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Ok, back to review.

For some reason, I kinda want to see a guy be a little witty around these women. It could add some mystery to the plot too.

A good chapter nonetheless especially that we can see how these ladies are monitoring the status of each guy.

I can't wait for the next chapter!

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