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Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 13 2015 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 5

So far, 5 chapters of set up.

Looking forward to the good parts...



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Coming soon!

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 12 2015 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

So there is this powerful woman, who is also sexy. Her dominance of the situation is also sexy.

The guys like her body, but hate her ideas.

These collars are extreme. If she can sense vitals, can she sense things like arousal? Now that would be interesting.

Are there any other women like this? She is perfect. Like a hot teacher in class. Except this class is in this Lindholm Global facility.

I read Dante's Inferno, and I don't remember that stuff. It's been a while. At least it was a text that I am familiar with.

Those two rules sound like something a stupid or unreasonable person would came up with. Like when your toddler says they want a candy but they can't understand how prices work.

"You have no rights". "I am god here". Wow. I don't know why, but these rules sound silly. Part of me wants to pull a government handbook and show why these statements make no sense.

I love this woman though. i don't like her name though. She needs a nickname like how you renamed Karolina to Lina. Karolina kinda sucked, but I really like Lina.

Good chapter, I can't wait for the next one!

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