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Reviewer: Loralye Signed [Report This]
Date: July 07 2016 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

MORE... Most read more! Solid story dude, I'm loving it

Reviewer: shall328 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2016 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 10

Nice development happening in the bar with Allison meeting Courtney, though I don't expect she'll be unfaithful with Isabelle. I assume it's Lilith pulling the strings, and that should be very interestiing to see play out later. I look forward to seeing exactly what happens next.

Reviewer: youre_my_slave Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 18 2015 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 5

You know how sometimes you just don't have words to describe what you're feeling? Yup. Uh... this is a positive review.

Author's Response:

Hahaha well, thanks? I guess? XD Glad you're enjoying it, at least.

Reviewer: HuzToru Signed [Report This]
Date: December 15 2015 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 1

Wow, keep going. This story has a great perspective on Sub and Dom.



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's a big part of what we're going for. 

Reviewer: Klyk Signed [Report This]
Date: December 05 2015 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 1

I have to say that this is really good.

The interaction is more natural then in most stories.



Author's Response:

Well, yeah, it should. 

As I keep telling people, plot is my thing. I try to write erotic, but that's more Choreo's thing. And damn is he good at it.  

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