Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2007 12:32 PM Title: Chapter Twenty Three: Conclusion of Events

A little rushed-sounding. I mean; you could have made it an even two dozen chapters, by having Emma "toy" with Jacen for, at least, one day before informing Alyson.

But, the main thing is: YOU ACTUALLY FINISHED IT! HOORAY!!!

And, thanks for sharing it. :-D

Author's Response:

There is actually a epilogue too, that i am halfway through, but I had gotten repeated emails about the story so I thought I better post something, as the natives were getting restless so to speak.

The epilogue provides more closure and insight. As it takes place a few days after the final chapter. So you get to see what ended up happening to him and how things shook out.