[Report This]Date: December 04 2007 11:59 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: “Prove yourself faithful with the little things so that you may be granted greater.”
Well, I would say it half-worked. By this point, Jacen is no doubt feeling emotionally "blue."
LOL!
Date: February 06 2007 4:22 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: “Prove yourself faithful with the little things so that you may be granted greater.”
Oooh, an interesting turn of events in chapter 14. so Al is behind all of jaces misery huh? Oh dear. I hope she doesnt admit she knows why he is so small. Its not like anyone would ever figure out her part in the whole thing. She should fess up that shes got him prisoner in her bedroom though. Then Jenni and miranda will get to see him!!!!
Interesting storytelling Ced. At first I was confused by the flashback that started the chpater and then I realized you were intertwining character development. it was a bit confusing the way you presented it but onsecond reading, its just fine.
Wait till Miranda finds her Jac as a helpless little doll. I am hoping that shes the gentle type. After jacs experience with his wild kid sister, I am hoping that both jenni and miranda give him alot of loving and sweetness as he will need it now.
Time will tell.
I look forward to alot more.
I just hope al doesnt ruin everything by coming too clean. We need her to be around as a mean spirited and teasing giantess for jace!