Reviews For The First Born
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Reviewer: billyevil Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2007 11:27 PM Title: Chapter Five: "Fall seven times, stand up eight"

I'm loving this story! Thank you for this chapter.. This is really turning into quite the epic.. thank you for keeping it so voyeur.. I love that!

Author's Response: The voyuer part, i feel will help make him more of a character people care about, later on.

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